Cubic Rainbow

[RareForm]

swimming against the current i realized that color was pulling the eyes from my skull, in every direction leaving me pained and dull. prizm phantoms daze and change me with photon laser accuracy, melting shapes into creatures animated by obtuse derivatives. And as they chase me I know they can never face me unless they freeze and erase me. The rainbow above me secretes a dark liquid that repels the matter i consist of, but i know not what this means or what the scheme of things may translate to in reptilian wingspans.

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

em liked this one too. he like the part "the rainbow above me secretes a dark liquid that repels the matter"...ect. it was dark and deep. loved this one.

 

[cherub]

Boy you constantly amaze me with your imagery when write.
SPLENDED

 

[RareForm]

i was flipping through my notebook last night and saw this one.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

it was like reading something out of a dream! yeah!

 

[skjalff]

Thats phat! I like this line a lot:

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...but i know not what this means or what the scheme of things may translate to in reptilian wingspans.
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pleasantly mind-bending and mysterious.

cheers,
gene

 

[RareForm]

^:D! miss ya around buddy.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very Nice

 

[Pantomime7]

Great write! love it

 

[onetwothreefour]

rather lovely.

i wish more people would make the effort to write like this instead of the normality of conservative poetry.

 

[sunshinesunderground]

your imagery surrounds the reader