Crystal

[MisterPoetry]

Pure
Watching the only truly original images fall...
The snowflakes...
Intricate geometric patterns identical to none...
Why is it the most beautiful and unique have to fall?
Tried to catch one for you...
To give you something as special as you are...
It died in my hands.
Felt it's life melt away "through" me...
It's single silent tear burrowed into the life line of my palm...
Making that death a part of my life.
Lifting my hand to the heavens street lights reflected off of the corpse laying in my hands...
Bouncing the full spectrum across my little hand as if the light of life had just materialized before me...
Looked deep into the liquid crystal laying lifeless within my grasp...
And had an epiphany.
This was the reason I can't hold onto you...
You are a snowflake.
Perfect.
Unique.
Utter beauty.
But...
Untouchable.
If I were to hold you, you would change...
And I would be responsible...
For the death of the snow princess...
So I'll just stand to the side...
Watching all the beauty of the world pass me by.
[ 01 March 2003: Message edited by: MisterPoetry ]

 

[nephil]

wow
this is incredible! Your words created such lovely images in my head

 

[MisterPoetry]

thank you do much for that!

 

[*SuGarCaNdy*]

*Agrees with Nephil*
You paint such a beautiful picture and tie it so purr-fectly into a wonderful message.
Thank you for these wonderful words.
*~Sugar~*

 

[MisterPoetry]

many thanks sugar!!!!! thank YOU for taking the time out to read it!!!

 

[harraser]

i really really like!!! i know the feeling well...

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

You are a snowflake.
Perfect.
Unique.
Utter beauty.
But...
Untouchable.
If I were to hold you, you would change...
And I would be responsible...

 

[MisterPoetry]

you guys are too kind!!!!
*blushes*

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

well, your words are too pure...
... like snowflakes.

 

[MisterPoetry]

thank you...
*walks out of thread blushing even more than before he walked in*