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Crystal Eyes

TJ

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Looking into the midnight abyss
Eyes so wide, I could drown in the black mist
Clinging to her heavenly euphoric embrace
Anticipating the seconds, I’ll soon give chase

Leaning over, my lips caress your scarlet face
Skin red hot, your excitement my lips taste
So many nights, I’ve gazed into your eyes
Feeling bereft, my imagination flies

Oh where art thou my lovely Crystal eyes?
Hast thou forsaken me to forever wonder why?
Your eyes, so black and lovely like midnight lace
Those black magic eyes, I’m bewitched by silky grace

Sitting here mesmerized
Sobriety long forgotten
Unknowingly been hypnotized
By the universe of those crystal eyes

Looking across at you
Into your eyes so blue
Our love is so very pure
Our love is so very true

I want you to know
Every second that passes
My heart does grow
Fonder and deeper in love
With you my precious blue eyed beau

I reach for your arm
And tie you off
I’m truly charmed
Our first trip together

I feel you tremble in my embrace
The pulse in your vein
My tongue doth taste

Taking the spike,
I lance a lovely rope
A river of blue beneath pale skin
A flashback of red,
I know I’m in

Undoing the tie,
Both of us nervous and high
Softly asking you, “Ready?”
You nod your head

No turning back
Slowly giving you
Your conconction of pleasure
I look at you, through those heroin blues

Lay back my love,
Rest your pretty head
With serenity, peace, and love
You are embraced

Your eyes so blue
Like an endless, vast, serene
Universe of oceans
I could drown forever
So inviting, such hypnotic motion

Your breathes are shallow
I can feel you lost
In your own private heroin bliss
Before you slip into unconscienceness
I gently steal a soft, tender kiss

And lay down beside you my love
And listen as you tell me your intimate dreams
You speak of beauty, you speak of hope
I’ve never felt so close to anyone before

“I love you, Crystal eyes,”
Is the last thing you say
I love you too, my lovely ocean blues
A half smile is cast upon your face

A single tear splashed upon your cheeck
I lean my head upon your bare chest
Your arm around me, I feel so very blessed
Each in our own private chemical nest

Who cares about tomarrow?
Who cares about yesterday?
There is only here and now
Forever, trapped in this moment we will stay
 
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Holy fuck.
I'm floored by these fucking poems.
Uncanny.
These peices are turning me the fuck on, whoever you are!
 
Thankyou Spore for the compliment. If ever you have a desire to see some of my other work, feel free to check out my homepage. It's on my profile. All my work is listed under the name punker_xx. Cheers.
TJ
 
I'm speechless...
almost.
that was absolutly amazing, beautiful, i completely fell in love with it.
that type of work is what makes me love poetry, you captured everything, perfectly.
im incredibly impressed.
-Niks-
 
This poem is so freakin amazing....stunning

As i read ur piece i wasn't sure of the emotion that made me cry....but i am sitting at my desk at work, and the tears are running down my face.

Thank u for this, it hit closer to home than i would like to admit.

B
 
Thankyou

Thankyou so very much for your words. Sometimes I summon feelings so intense and try to put it into words accurately, never really knowing how I'll come across. I felt like the state you said you were in Snow Frog, not really understanding why such intense emotions, but this is what came out. Thankyou again people. xoxo
 
Oh where fore art thou my lovely Crystal eyes?

i think that line should be written as "where art thou"? i could be wrong but "wherefore" would be paraphrased as "why".

otherwise, very powerful and intense piece :)
 
Old English

It's been quite a few years since I had studied old English, but that sounds accurate to me. Did the edit bit. Thanks for the tip and the comment. :)
 
This piece has been of the best I ever read...
My boy has the prettiest blues eyes I have ever
seen.. You took every word I could not find.
And made me realize how I feel..

Thank you. I want to add this to my favorites.
Let me know if it's okay.
 
Sure no problem. Thankyou for the comments. I'm glad to hear you say what you did about the blue eyes. Am glad it helped. :)
 
TJ said:

A single tear splashed upon your cheeck
I lean my head upon your bare chest
Your arm around me, I feel so very blessed
Each in our own private chemical nest

Who cares about tomarrow?
Who cares about yesterday?
There is only here and now
Forever, trapped in this moment we will stay

sighs... :)
 
I have told so many friends bout this piece. It still makes me want to cry when I read it.

B:D
 
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