Cryptosporidium Vernacular

[RareForm]

Crippled crackhead conversation
with rusty needled words.
Toxic artery thoughts
for thalidomide integrity.

Curdled colonic suffusion
defacing oral precision.
engorge the viscous effluence
and digest the arid flux.

Acquiesce to routine nausea
and shoot dopamine excrete.
addicted to biological discharge
acting on mechanical impulse.

Viral, faecal, deficit dialogue,
verbal, replica, down's syndrome,
spastic colon, shock mentality,
that you emit through vacant speech.

 

[cherub]

Okay,,,,, after having to look up some of these words hehe i really like the flow of this poem,, in my head i read it fast and with a beat.... hmmmmmm could be lyrical?
great stuff

 

[Altered_Soul9]

this is, yet again, an awesome piece. Your mind is a never ending poem full of love and hate. This poem has went off course and I love it. very, Very Nice

 

[katmeow]

Viral, faecal, deficit dialogue,
verbal, replica, down's syndrome,
spastic colon, shock mentality,
that you emit through vacant speech.

I really liked this... so clever!

 

[RareForm]

thanks for the replies....for those who didn't really understand this.....this is somewhat far fetched, but i think it's quite effective in a way. I'm basicaly making a point about empty headed small talk that means nothing and takes no thought to talk about, and how people will adopt something to talk about even if it means nothing to them at all and they talk shit about it, that makes no sense. as far as the name goes 'Cryptosporidium' is a type of bacteria that causes diarrhea and 'Vernacular' is another word for dialect.

 

[E-girl]

^^^ wow, its even more awesome with this little explanation behind it. kind of has so much more meaning now.

i thought of looking up the words, then didn't.....so i didnt really understand it when i read it, but i liked the way it sounded out loud. good job and thanks for the background on it.

 

[neverwas]