critique the song above

its not really an "emo" song.
if you listen to all that emo bullshit music and then listen to this
its nothing like it

more of an indy song if you ask me

I think that the fact that everone in the group is doing their own thing really makes the song great
It clashes beautifully.

As for your song its a good song
6/10
once agian
not really my style.

Adieu -Enter Shikari
 
this was for : Julie London - Cry me a river

thats good stuff
gave me that chet baker vibe
some old pop jazz with added romance
you can typically ear the hollow body jazz guitar on top of the upright bass
nice deserted lounge vibe

7 on 10
 
this on is for adieu

thats song started good
then you ear a crappy emo voice
intrumental interlude
and then it get real bad with the now we are heavy part
to a slow exit

real bad for my taste but with some element that i really liked like the intro and the synth sound and how the pace fitted the melody

3 0n 10


now lets fly to brasil for : Os Mutantes - A Minha Menina
 
There's that "E" word again. A friend of mine put it best when he said "Emo is just a word people use to describe a band they don't like".
 
4/10

I've never liked Dr. John. Sings and plays almost in the exact style of Randy Newman. I will say this. The man can play the piano very well.

I was going to say the same thing. Dr. John can sound better, but not if he's just going to do a stupid sounding Newman impression.
 
I was going to say the same thing. Dr. John can sound better, but not if he's just going to do a stupid sounding Newman impression.

fuck it i know that looked really commercial, but yall dont know what dr. john brought to music....well new orleans musicians in general.

btw yall know nothing.....
dr. john cant sing...and he sure as hell cant sound like randy newman....
 
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Goddammit! Will one of you Jews critique my song already and leave another! Fuuuuuck!
 
8/10

i've listened to it a few more time since yesterday when you recommended it. after each time i listen to it i feel more emotionally attached to the song. the violins are definitely a highlight and i dig the intro as well. it spun me out not knowing these guys were aussies and i'd never heard of them.

John5 (formerly of Marilyn Manson) - Damaged
 
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