Crimson Tears

[Along For The Ride]

Darkness surrounds my rusty blade knife
I'm living in shadows and taking your life
Don't ask me why, this time may be the worst
No body ask why blood quenches my thirst
I'll live in denial since truthes just mean lies
Prepare for the worst as these 6 angels die
I hold in my hand a note for the gods
I'll tell them tonight, their promises just frauds
So why must I be caught in this world of hate
No boundries, No love, no one to relate
I've now given up, I've failed my last try
And now crimson tears will fall from the sky
And once again, We live in deceit
We try to prevail, but live lives of defeat
So in my hand I hold this red pen
Waiting for nothing, it's time for the end...

 

[Cosmic Mist]

I love the rhythm and feeling of this piece. It flows very well. I also like the fact that one is allowed to interpret it how one likes, as you haven't been too specific on the details.

Beautifully done.

 

[cherub]

^^^^ beautiful is a great word for this piece.


truth is just so hard to find in this world in reality and not the way people think it is...great work

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I have to agree with both comments above. Rich beautiful imagery!