crawl space

[tubgirl.jpg]

crawl space

We crash
through dusk,
while blinded
by dawn
In senseless
collision,
'til one day
we're gone
I trail
over thighs,
fingers colder
than snow
I crawl down
the valley,
into darkness
below

 

[Jabberwocky]

fingers colder
than snow
I crawl down
the valley,
into darkness
below

Horrifying, in a good way. My mind recoiled from the visual.

nice poem

 

[0.o_LaCuNa_o.0]

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Horrifying, in a good way. My mind recoiled from the visual.

Yeah, I re-read it. Here I was trying to do a sex-ay euphemism for vagina, and it reads like a horror-scene.
Woe be tubgirls lovers.

And thanks dude!

 

[Hannah Capps]

Again, love the way you express yourself! Wowed over here! I got the exact opposite of horror, I read two souls desperate unfulfillment...

 

[Crackle pop]

Brilliant love it

 

[RareForm]

Delicious victuals of delightful visuals.

 

[cduggles]

crawl space

We crash
through dusk,
while blinded
by dawn
In senseless
collision,
'til one day
we're gone
I trail
over thighs,
fingers colder
than snow
I crawl down
the valley,
into darkness
below

Wielding the pen like a scalpel as usual. Rich imagery.