crash

[vurtomatic]

because
we
can
and so
it
ends
mind asunder
thoughts buzzing but static
connections failing
switchboard crosswiring
join the fucking dots
damn
dots
they move, they move!
chasing them like lost
broken dreams am i
grasp but they slip out of my mind
like water so slippery over the riverbed
or pebbles tumbling turning in the water
so slippery over the riverbed
made of pebbles
my thoughts
or are they
moving dots?
give me back the haze
comfort confound
ordered chaos
broken yet whole
because
we
can
and
so
it
ends
[edit: this is the aftermath of travelling]
[ 20 October 2002: Message edited by: vurtomatic ]

 

[plazma]

mind asunder
thoughts buzzing but static
connections failing
switchboard crosswiring
join the fucking dots
damn
dots
they move, they move!
This I understand!
On some days, I can really see my thoughts like that, moving and evading not being pinned down.
This work has got this strange flowing and looping quality to it, which packs quite a lot of emotional and philosophical punch, without being overly wordy.
-plaz out-

 

[vurtomatic]

Originally posted by plazma:
This work has got this strange flowing and looping quality to it
and that pretty much sums my current state of mind <insert roll eyes icon>