Corridors Of Devastation

[Istigeit]

Surrounding halls and surrogate shadow rooms
Gleaming obstructive creation of quickening doom
Closed eye visuals appear under blue light ( )
Randomly scattered, intentionally blocking my way

Do you keep tabs on creating this world
Or is this an abstract vision unfurled
Mining your mind is not a task
It's merely a chore in which I can bask

I'm wandering rooms you showed me last night
I stare w/ amazement at such strange sights
No mortal hand can tear me where I now stand
But if it does I will return w/ haste to my land

 

[plazma]

Goddamn!

Very nice work I say, very nice work!

Cheers & thanks for posting this one. :D

-plaz out-

 

[Chalice]

Good Luck...

Good luck finding your way, very well put!
Much luv!

 

[The HiVe MiND]

Do you keep tabs on creating this world
Or is this an abstract vision unfurled
---
I'm wandering rooms you showed me last night
I stare w/ amazement at such strange sights

^
These lines did a great job of tying into the rest of the writing.
I might imagine the abstractness u felt that night.