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conscious causality

dpc2424

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conscious causality

the mark of lacking dexterity
to grasp reality
can't manage to touch without twisting
in these old tinted sceneries
odd and gray
i stood near broken windows and faithless pawns
who had shown me all the pieces
and separated sounds
so as faithless as they
i gazed without perception
in hopes
in the terrible lie that was once hope
that things would change
but what becomes of change after hope is lost?

i ask, begging, pleading
wash the salt out of the wound
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ive used bluelight for awhile and overlooked the words section...some of the stuff ive been reading are mind blowing. youve inspired me...
 
i think this is a beautiful piece - especially the last two lines, they are so pleading (i don't want to use the word desparate).....

bk:)
 
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