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Complicated tears of love

doofqueen

doofqueen

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I’m a little rusty, words have been lost on me but I’ve been craving to write, finally found some words, hope they mesh ok.

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At long last the thoughts come out
I voice my love on paper
Days have passed
And crossed words exchanged
I’m missing
I’m wondering
I’m waiting for you
Will I be seeing you soon?
One wish would be
Of us in bliss
Sliding along delicate skins
And smelling your kiss
The blue in your eyes
The sun kisses on your face
The curl in your hair
Makes my angry heart ache
I thought I was strong
And mine was of iron
But when I’m not with you
I don’t feel hardened
The naivety in your eyes
Makes tears form from within
I want to comfort and teach
I want what others call sin.
I feel for you
What I’ve had with no other
Magic, Bonding, Strength and Power.
 
Glad to see that you've given into the urge to write!

I'd say this is my favourite out of all of your poems (that I've read). :)

I love these lines:

One wish would be
Of us in bliss
Sliding along delicate skins
And smelling your kiss
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And these:

I want to comfort and teach
I want what others call sin.
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^^ You know I can't take that but anything as a huge compliment. Wow... thanks alot. What makes you say that though?

wordy - thankyou :)

KM - aye? A little confused as to what you mean :\ ?
 
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