Colors

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Red is hatred & disgust,
Blood bile & mistrust,
Scars scabs & rotting dust,
Anger love & wicked lust...

Blue is sorrow & the sky,
Clouds & stars above you & I,
It's deceit, it is a lie,
The second thing to see when we die...

Green is your envy & your pride,
It's the rotting flower that you hide,
It's the garden through which I spied,
It's hunger & things that died...

White is the innocence that you boast,
The wedding gown & the wine thats toast,
It's another virgin, pure like most,
It's the rose, blooming on the coast...

Black is loneliness & the gloom,
Flowers that will never bloom,
It's the heart that never loved,
It's the light around the moon...


Critique if you'd like. Comments welcome.

 

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Bump. Words needs more traffic me thinks.

 

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Come on. Anybody?

 

[beanpoophead]

Black is loneliness & the gloom,
Flowers that will never bloom,
It's the heart that never loved,
It's the light around the moon...

i like it. it has a lot of symbolism and thats cool :D

i especially like ^^^ that part. it reminds me of what i think black is. especially the moon part, i have a thing about the moon and i like how you put it.