Colorful Sin

[LadyWidow]

Touch my heart, touch my face
Tear me apart, rip through the lace
Bring me to bliss, get me high
This something not to miss, take me to the sky
Look into my eyes, breathe in my ear
I am no longer in disguise, for you are to dear
Lay me across a savage sheet, raise your eyes to mine
Begin to express the passionate heat, make me shine
In the darkness we lay in weariness, after giving in
Staring in cheeriness, to this colorful sin
To you I gave my love, and in return you gave yours
I am drifting down from above, as into me your love pours.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by LadyWidow
Lay me across a savage sheet, raise your eyes to mine
Begin to express the passionate heat, make me shine
In the darkness we lay in weariness, after giving in
Staring in cheeriness, to this colorful sin

^This was playfully mischevious, and deceptively simple.
I loved your use of language here, and the brimming basket phrases.

 

[cherub]

very playfull piece to read and makes you kinda smile when you read it. Very nice !