collision

[atri]

tumbling over
under and in
i see your face
im born again
cant define
your control over me
ive never met you
you are fantasy
i hope one day
to find you there
head on chest
hearts laid bare
if that day comes
and youre by my side
ill know the feeling
of when love collides
atri

 

[spinkle]

atri, I love that, no reservations
do you write music?

 

[Tarsarlan]

I could almost hear music

 

[atri]

no, i dont write music. but i plan on doing someday. i start college in fall and im going to major in music. i hear it in my head all the time, and i love it. thanks for the appreciation.
atri

 

[Sweetpea]

mmmmmmm

head on chest
hearts laid bare

 

[Liquid69Raver]

good stuff atri
~Likwid

 

[CharleeGirl]

^^^
Right
good job

 

[Dagny]

**sigh**
It's thoughts like this that make me sleep on the couch sometimes. I hate being in the bed alone, it gets cold some nights.
Beautifully written, hun.