Cold Drops

[Dtergent]

The tree breaks a gust into a thousand little currents of air.

The leaves nod slightly to release tiny, cold drops
That make you remember the rain.

 

[swilow]

^I like. The picture- is melancholy. Playing the guitar in an empty tomb....

 

[lostNfound]

hey this is really cool.
good to see someone mix it up in here with some imagery, well done.

 

[Dtergent]

Why thank you...

That photo spurred the creation of the short verses. The kind of trigger that makes you remember things that you assume were gone

 

[mariacallas]

I like it. Was that picture taken in mountain province. :D

 

[Dtergent]

Nope, it was in India

 

[(Wordy)]

Beautiful!

 

[New]

Absolutely fascinating...

 

[Papa1]

That's beautiful... Very meditative. I love the combination of trees, wind, and remembering the rain...