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cobweb (thoughts)

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In the depths and throws of emotion
I have this idea that I'm going to write a poem about every track on my demo and send a booklet with the CDs when I shop them . . . not lyrics, but a poem that I write about the experience of listening to a song after I've wrote it, when I'm in a different place than I was . . . here is the first of those poems, coincides with my song Cobweb (Three) . . .


I can hear emotions
peak around the speaker
soft pounds
and a voice that wails
as sweet as December . . .
Was this the soundtrack to
some proto-sexual funeral procession
in my head?
The audio background noise
on a television show?
Because
hard as I try
I can't recall the feelings,
the isolated
despair and sadness
that I breathed into this song . . .
but the work
makes my heart feel,
regardless
. . . of course it was real . . .
a soul repaired
not quite healed . . .
 
This is good. As a muscian I feel your words and know how you feel. Writing is a process that can drain the soul while setting it free. Music is the soundtrack of our lives.
 
I am the band, lol . . . I go by the same thing as here, Negative . . . its all downtempo and a spattering of DnB . . . and I don't have my first CD quite done yet, and then who knows . . . I'm in the process of shopping a few tracks to labels now, so maybe . . . but some of my stuff is up in the links in my sig . . . be aware, though, that about half my work is hip hop instrumentals, for the purpose of pairing with MCs eventually . . . most of the downtempo stuff isn't up yet . . . this song is though . . .

. . . and thanks guys. :D
 
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