Cloud Spectator

[K'dOUTinAZ]

Smile on my face
It must have been a good day
You took me to that forbidden place
Provided eden for me to stay
Not often can I visit
Mass destruction does not provide a ticket
Your love gives me sanity
Your voice amplifys such clarity
So please don't let go
Illuminate my self worth
Deliver inner peace
You reduce my negativity that I put forth
Found myself down and out
Awoken hungover from a cloud
The reading railroad pick-up
The sky-diving fuck-up
I was white river rafting (up the noes)
Waiting by the pay phone for it to snow
Snatching up a purse to fill a rig
Confirmed reservations for a fix
(So you visit) someone who is sick
Mediating havoc
Someone pulling tricks
You still foster with your wholeness
Keep me warm during the coldness
Demonstrate your boldness
You took me under your wing
Serenity you bring
Knowing I was a fiend
Bathe me with your love
My angel from above
I want you to know
This ain't no fucking joke
You restore me with your compeling glow
It ain't no secret I would do anything for you
Make sure this pulls through
Whatever you want me to do
You know I'd die for you
Don't worry a thing
No more emotional pain
You got everything else to gain
I would give you anything
My body
My mind
My soul
My heart
All for you
Just don't let go

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

^I like the rhythm of this piece, the word choices are jarring in places, but the style is so rocking and lilting, it really contrasts well.

Well done.

 

[K'dOUTinAZ]

Thank you

 

[beanpoophead]

i likes it alot

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

In agreement with ctob here - the rhythm is wonderful! Theres something so nice and moody in the tone wich makes it a great read!

 

[K'dOUTinAZ]

Gracious