close your eyes

[beanpoophead]

broken, burn another down
stabbed me, again... again
blood trickles, it falls
come now, you can't
make me whole
and i can't think past
tomorrow
the next is one to far
with my love likk waterfalls
pours out of my sick, still songs
danced like butterflies upon
my dirty lies
awake, dream, sleep, die
circle my circles and dot my i's
life's only fair

when i close your eyes

 

[FixXxer]

its so... true. damn.

*tear* life sure sucks like that

great work btw.

 

[RareForm]

another true/personal piece, i loved it..

just needs a little revision

 

[beanpoophead]

uhh note to self:

dont post poems, when your slightly drunk because your spelling will suck at life...

 

[FixXxer]

really? i post over half of mine wasted beyond belief.. and i rarely have mistakes.

 

[cherub]

very much a piece with lots of turmoil but the slightly drunk state of mind can do that

 

[RareForm]

lol