Clarity

[Taliana]

I havent written anything in a while, dont know why, i just havent been able to, havent had the "thing" in me... but its coming back.
This is a really rough version, its unedited... so its not completely finished.
Im not normally one to writed using rhyme, but i dunno, it just happened here.
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An abstract memory of a life once lived
shielded by a sketchy outline of dreams unfilfilled
a revelation, unravels in the rays of an inspiration barely seen

The sun gleams down on her washed out face
a moment of clarity dawns
She feels the tingle of life through her veins
its been years, shes seen tears, its been years

Cleansed through a sleep on a cool spring night
She awakes, ready, for her new found life
Letting go of the past, its hard, but she succeeds with all her might
As she opens her wings, ready for a new flight

Walking into the unknown, her spirit is bright
Crystal colours and dreams are to be created and fulfilled
To live these dreams she so longingly wants
she must leave those behind who will hinder.

 

[E-girl]

it was worth the wait!!
awesome piece of work

 

[Vaile*]

Gotta love those moments of clarity

Transcend! The choice to look up is yours alone.
So walk the path babe... and you just might end up flying above it.

 

[Taliana]

Danke for your kind words guys Makes me smile seeing nice people like both of you commenting on my work.

And yes, definately Rob, those moments of clarity truly are inspiring, i only wish they happened more often!

Writing this piece has definately re-lit my passion of writing... why oh why did i stop?