Chitter Chatter

[Pomplemous]

A happy sadness floats up above me
A cheerful misery lingers inside
A dull shine lies down below me
while a melancholy mischief walks along beside.

The infusion and confusion as to my disillusion
Are a frequent intrusion
to the running of my mind
A speedy solution is what I must find
Absolution from all of mankind.

*yawn*

dis-spirited and unmotivated, whilst strangely bad girl-ish and laughing on the inside today.
what else can I say. Cant come out to play.

disspirited - is that a word?

 

[RareForm]

i liked it, it was different

 

[Pomplemous]

hahaha - that's kind but it is just experimenting with words put together - not with any kind of meaning.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by Pomplemous
The infusion and confusion as to my disillusion
Are a frequent intrusion
to the running of my mind
A speedy solution is what I must find
Absolution from all of mankind.

^This was great...really conjoured changing emotions and images for me.
The sign of a great piece, and a great writer. :D

I'd like to read some of your 'proper' pieces if this is just chitter chatter.

 

[Pomplemous]

^ WOW!! Thank you so very much!!

You never really think about anyone liking your stuff - its sometimes just words to you, or sometimes your pen writes it by itself - sort of thing. Anyway - will post another one in a while - but thank you again!!