chassing the shadow from the light

[day_for_night]

i suck you in
like a thick vapour
warming me from the inside

i inhale until it hurts
allowing you to penetrate my soul fully
chassing the shadow from the light

getting on this merry-go-round
for another spin around the sun
kindered spirit in tow

i couldnt imagine another solar trip
without you

 

[vurtomatic]

short with unexpected imageries, especially:

getting on this merry-go-round
for another spin around the sun

...

i couldnt imagine another solar trip
without you

 

[E-girl]

cute

 

[frostyangel]

i inhale until it hurts
allowing you to penetrate my soul fully
chassing the shadow from the light

the best line I've read all day...

 

[day_for_night]

thanks all

 

[cherub]

*Lovely*

once again a poem not in the norm but very powerful in the sense of emotions and vision.

 

[PsychoKitten]

this is sweet you always have a nice turn of phrase d4n