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The HiVe MiND

The HiVe MiND

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I like my poems, do you? :D
I will start posting some...

CHANGE

Coiling into the darkness of a cavern
what lies within?
The prick if a pin signifies the beginning of an experience
that dwells within us for eternity.
It now has time as manifest physicality
as dream has always foretold.
The beginning of the end is just the beginning of a reality
much vaster and glorious in its possibilities
to express love upon matter in a way the angels would nurture
as a point in a sea of quantum probabilities
that has divine spark.

- H!V37
 
I'll explain...
The cavern and the pin prick represent humanities stumble through history, hurting ourselves along the way. The pain is symbolic for CHANGE. We learn from our mistakes, and grow.
Our adventurousness that led us to the cave in the first place is inspired by our dreams. Through our learning we make our dreams come true.
Altering reality in this way brings about its end. The start of our new one is suitably profound.
 
OOOhhhhhh

I have to keep it real. At first I read this piece and was dumbfounded. I reread it several times and it just didn't make ANY kind of sense. Please don't get me wrong, it sounded good, seemed deep, but was just on a level that I could not reach. I concluded that if I knew you personaly perhaps then I would understand what it was REALLY about. And trust I know that is a lame cop off. So I then decided that I would ask you to explain it. Imagine how shocked AND greatful I was to find out you had already taken the liberty of posting the explination. After reading your explination and then rereading your piece I reallly do feel you. I would have never, on my own, been able to decifer your literary imagry. It's odd that even when I could not comprihend the meaning of your work I still felt the power behind your mental imagery. That is VERY impresive.
 
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