Carbon

[harraser]

There’s a lot to do to make amends
I’m not sure you’ve got the gumption
Can you destroy your worth in the eyes of all?
You’ve told me all along
You’re worthless
So it shouldn’t be hard

Go on
Tell them
Tell them you’re sorry
Go on
Go on tell them.

Can you tell them all they’re better?
We’re all made of blood and bone
Tell them theirs is better
Tell them
It’s all water and carbon

Think of it as assisted karma
Think of it as a helping hand
Think of it as a higher price
For services rendered in advance
Think of it as jumping the queue

Go on
Tell them
Tell them you’re sorry
Go on
Go on tell them
You’re sorry you’re you

Go on now, it’s over soon
Don’t worry love
It’s what you have to pay
It will all be over soon
And straight on to…
You’ll do it better next time

Late
You’re always late

 

[neverwas]

im gonna start from the top of ur peice and work my way down with all the things i wana quote and comment about what ur writting meant to me personally...

You’ve told me all along
You’re worthless
So it shouldn’t be hard

...sometimes admitting is the hardest thing to do.

Think of it as assisted karma
Think of it as a helping hand
Think of it as a higher price
For services rendered in advance
Think of it as jumping the queue

...most things happen to late, or after you figure them out. its not always as easy as queue jumping but if you can do it and get there first then you will be all the more smarter for it.

Go on
Go on tell them
You’re sorry you’re you

...i use to always wish i wasnt me. i use to always want to apologise for being me. i always try to change myself so im not me. i turned myself into somethng fake and it wasnt untill ifound someone "specail" that i realised i am who i am and i shouldnt want to change that.

people love their friends for who they are inside (hopefully) and not outside. anyone that you change for isnt worth the effort (IMO)

Go on now, it’s over soon
Don’t worry love
It’s what you have to pay
It will all be over soon

...thats what i was saying to one of the strippers at work yesterday. plus whatever doesnt kill you hun, can only make you stronger theirs a price for everything now days.

And straight on to…
You’ll do it better next time

...you can only improve on past mistakes and learn from them. so it doesnt happen again.

Late
You’re always late

...these last two lines made me think of my dad. *sighs* hes late for everything he does lol and i stil cant fingure out why hes always late when he has no reason to be.

......
i really liked this peice baby. and i think u can tell that from the huge reply. it was thought prevoking and also i got something out of it for myself. any peice of writting that has something in it for everyone is another one to admire. i know you probly thinkn 'pfft...it was just a silly lil peice' but sometimes those are the best. it was great

*mwah*

 

[chrissy]

amazing... like ur basically talkin to me one-on-one like we used to talk long ago (kinda miss it, should do it again sometime).
i need a wake-up call. i always think im worthless... and i also *do* "tell them" i am..... diggin my own grave, setting myself up for a fall.....
maybe later, when i have a bit more time to breathe and i'll gain control of my life again, i'll be able to take a more rational look at myself and find something of worth.

(must catch up in holidays like we agreed i need thought-provoking stuff like this in my life... missin it)

chrissy

 

[up all night]

Ant, you have such a bluelight following.

You write things I want to sing.

 

[Frosty da snowman]

I tried to quote out the verses i liked best but I liked the whole dammn thing. It flows, it lives, it breathes. I'm not sure if it's ment to be a reminder to someone or a personal reminder that were human, or if it a indiment(sp) of someones failings. I think it works either way. Excellent read.

 

[up all night]

*bump*