car crash

[Shuddr2Think]

my eyes slip out of
focus.
when ever you walk into a room...
struggling to grasp the many words
i won't ever say to you
unless given the chance..
we could be choking on the obvious
for all i know...
drowning in the reality of this...
i live with it...
every day.
wake up to the sounds of you...
6am reminder of everything...
sleep isn't even safe anymore...
dreams have been taken over by you.
and i love hate love hate every moment of it.
just make sense again.
i hate losing control...
and me and you
we're a car crash...
always...

 

[Catachreses]

mmmm. this put a smile on my face. i'm not quite sure why. *huuuug*
ry.
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"Euphoric, narcotic, pleasantly hallucinant."

 

[greyspace]

I think you must have my life

beautiful. and yes, exactly.

 

[RavinRaych]

"we could be choking on the obvious"...that's the damn truth.

plurr
raychul

 

[KarMaJunGLisT]

You either live a dramatic life, or possess STRONG talents for all humanity! It was beautiful, and unique.

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-Quoth the Raver Nevermore

 

[E-girl]

you know that butterflies-in-the-stomach feeling a person sometimes gets? that's what i got from reading this.
nice imagery.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
Find one person you can count on forever, one person you can love forever, and one person you can be with forever... and if you're lucky, it will all be the same person.
"Live for the memories."

 

[Shuddr2Think]

^
^
that is one of the best compliments anyone has ever given me.
thank you.

 

[yakksoho]

I love the idea of a car-crash in the room every time a person is seen.
brings lots of thoughts to me head
good work!! keep it up and the world will be a much better place.

 

[Mellabopper]

i'm also a fan of this line:

we could be choking on the obvious for all i know...

excellent

Mella