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Dagny

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A wish. That one day soon poetry will replace these disjointed phrases.

I miss it so.

Being able to write emotions who
become beautiful despite their reality;
flowingly communicating and
mentally masturbating
themselves onto the page.
Receiving praise for their cum stains rather than
recoiling from expressions of disdain
because

I can't say it so that you will understand.

When one spends life on mountaintops this is inescapably so.

Especially since the mountain is mine and
now so far away. Some days the
picture in my mind is even hazy,
abducting peacefulness and
soiling the wistfulness
supporting my well of strength.
Sense of self translates into nonsense
when imaginings no longer
help to

Remind me of myself. The part of me that's who I am

which for all of us is where we come from.

Because who we've been adds up;
it is who we are and the sum of both
equals the person that will be.

And I just wish the words would come back to me;
so that someone could listen.
so that someone could understand.
so that some relief could be had
from this silence none of you can hear.
 
awww shit Dagny. Those who have toiled for hours over where to place a coma, or which pronoun to use CAN understand.

;)

And I just wish the words would come back to me;
It is quite apparent that they have.

Dagny, you stand heads and shoulders above word-crafts peoples. I find it rather reassuring to see that you still meet and exceed the expectations of your audience.
 
whether its poetry or not is up to you, but your descriptions are still perfect. sometimes the poetry cant be in words
 
so that someone could listen.
i will always listen to what great words you speak of,
as i know you have much wisdom to share.
and i do hope the words you seek show themselves once again
as i know the clouds above your mountain,
will pass soon.

btw hello dags...& aly :P~
 
So much of this i want to reply to.

First

I can't say it so that you will understand.

No one needs to understand but you, but i can relate,, sometimes words fail me over and over again, though in my head it is so clear.

When one spends life on mountaintops this is inescapably so.

Especially since the mountain is mine and
now so far away. Some days the
picture in my mind is even hazy,
abducting peacefulness and
soiling the wistfulness
supporting my well of strength.
Sense of self translates into nonsense
when imaginings no longer
help to

Your mountain has always been amazing and peaceful it is who you are.
thank you for sharing that part with me. Even the BIG spiders ;)

And I just wish the words would come back to me;
so that someone could listen.
so that someone could understand.
so that some relief could be had
from this silence none of you can hear.

woman your silence sometimes is louder then talking.
sometimes things just take time.

love you girl !
 
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