cage

[izzy66]

back to the past
now choke on it.
into the night,
so impulsive.
every wish granted
but still in a cage.
given the key
wouldn't you leave?
all night i walk
too cold to stop.
now it's too hot
to get away.
"if you go,
that door stays
closed."
threats are my favorite
gifts.

 

[swilow]

Intense and flows nicely. Very good

93....

 

[izzy66]

^^ love under law.

thank you, swilow
-izzy

 

[New]

Pretty, pretty.

 

[lostNfound]

you've got me wondering about the key.
i would leave.


this got me thinking..... about a few things.


nicely done.

 

[izzy66]

thanks, y'all. i really do appreciate that you take the time not only to read but to comment.

y'think, Samael? i felt like it came out kinda vicious.

L-n-F, i left, never looked back nor regretted my decision. i hope your thinking leads you to create something.

thanks very much.

 

[New]

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

 

[izzy66]

^^ absolutely