Bury Me Broken ; My New Song (:

[mini sari]

I did not think a word, Reality felt so unclear
And I shot out to you, Words *I* felt insincere
And now I shall suffer, So scatter me down
Shattered in pieces, Left cold on this ground

I'm not a doll, I can't sit and pose
I'm not an angel in Ohioian clothes
I'm human, You are too.
I'm not the others, But I can't make this clearer to you.

So bury me broken, For words accidental
Tear up the letters, Once found sentimental
And hope that you'll find someone more ornamental than me

No, I'm not a doll, I'm so far from perfect
I tore up emotion before it could surface
I wish I were better
I proved I'm not better, By this..

So take your analogy and throw it down deep
Don't forget the sorries that I gave you to keep

Bury me broken
Keep my song as a token
As the care I truly felt
That 'til now was unspoken

I'm not a doll, I can't sit and pose
I'm not an angel in Ohioian clothes
I'm human, You are too.
I'm not the others, But I can't make this clearer to you.

No, I'm not a doll, I'm so far from perfect
I tore up emotion before it could surface
I wish I were better
I proved I'm not better, By this..

Forget the I exist
'Cause memory can't make you benefit

I hope you see, I'm sorry for this..
I wish you'd see, I'm sorry for this..

 

[cherub]

I bet to music that is just lovely hun!!!!!!

My favorite part is this

No, I'm not a doll, I'm so far from perfect
I tore up emotion before it could surface
I wish I were better
I proved I'm not better, By this..

Forget the I exist
'Cause memory can't make you benefit

 

[Pantomime7]

I really liked this piece. These words could stand alone without music, yet I'm sure they sound great with it. Props!

 

[Jungle Bunny]

Penny Penny Dime

The knack for wording you have definitely got. This statement rung true for reasons I'll keep personal. In application to others I think it will tug at some tattered hearts.

And hope that you'll find someone more ornamental than me

I think that applies to any person who was dumped for not being:
the "right" color
the "right" sex
the "right" gender
the "right" social status
the “right” weight

Bump it "B", it just applies