Burst

[spinkle]

Nothing crucial by way of introduction other than to say that this piece occurred sometime in the summer of 2001.

Burst

Bliss arrives as rupture
excising a segment
elemental and crucial
for further progression
confused by mutation
though grasping absence
obliterating impatience
serenely clinging
to calm inspired
to resign into sedation
settling suppressed
dependent on coercion
as an act of convincing
begging faith to form
each description failing slightly
to wholly contain the event
evidence outweighing conclusions
now known to appear
grounded and based
in unwelcome predictions
missing moment the seed
of disbelief born
to become self-destructive
obsessed with space
left blank by intention.

 

[bisKi]

wow.

each line reminded me of how i felt a few years back especially this

to become self-destructive
obsessed with space
left blank by intention.

really nice work *hugs*

 

[PsychoKitten]

it's lovely, and it reminds me of a time in my life also.

Much love honey *mwah*