Build not to Burn

[TiberCross]

Motivatied pupils, an ocean of motion
Collectively energized with sniper-eye-focus
Precisely synergized and strengthened and
Standing strong as an army of billions
A billion points of light
With the psuedo-spirits of jesus christ

Hands and smiles thinking the same
Hearts and heads linking the chain

 

[RareForm]

i liked it.

 

[K'dOUTinAZ]

With the psuedo-spirits of jesus christ

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[KaideAlike44]

Hands and smiles thinking the same
Hearts and heads linking the chain

This is the part I liked the best, This one was phat yo.

 

[neverwas]

this was cute to read

 

[cherub]

Definately thinks me of a drug relate poem, makes me think of the past.

 

[TiberCross]

^ i can see the possible narcotic-connotations you speak of. and even i can see some of those old raves in my head when i read this one. but, alas, drugs are not my inspiration. our own inadequate evolution is my inspiration.

basically this is something that will never be. it is only a dream.

 

[RareForm]

BUMP - one of my favorite reads!

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I love the end, its a shame I missed it. Very Nice