"Brigund"

[MACstar]

Well, this here is a song I wrote. The lyrics anyway. It is basically about the peril's of addiction, and how loved ones whom used to look up to you, now look down. And once I reach that point, it seems like my "give a fuck button" gets busted. I'm like, "fuck it! you don't like me? I don't like you either! And I don't give a fuck anymore!"

I just feel like sharing this little diddy, it's titled, "Brigund". Thanks...

Keep the crown,
Lapse of time,
This fractured fault is mine,
Heed my Blade,
A daily Squire,
Of wrists like pink wrought fire,
I can see it in their eyes,
Better off I die,

Nobody, Nobody likes me anymore.
Nobody, Nobody wants me anymore.
Just keep on burning all bridges,
Self interests serving sly syringes,
Blood Sucking Ravenous,

Pores. Bleach. Yurn.
Score. Breach. Burn.

Blood Sucking Ravenous,
Nobody, Nobody likes me anymore,
Nobody, Nobody wants me anymore.

I can see it in their eyes,
Better off I die.

While it thrives,
Flying veins,
I can heal,
And heal,
Force it down,
Pry at plains,
These plateaus conquer; Steal,
City scapes seem to paint wise influx Empires,
Through the long dreary days, and Brushstroke Sovereign Nights.

I can see it in their eyes,
Better off I die...

 

[thujone]

the pacing is kind of jarring at times, but the words are great. is the song's melody as turbulent? imho some editing would go such a long way since there's a lot of great content to work with

ps. is this spelling of brigand intentional?

 

[MACstar]

Hey thanks, I know what you mean about the turbulence, it's rediculous. I guess you would have to hear it, but the melody is steady, yet all over the place. I'm not in a band anymore so I have just been doing alot of writing. I moved to another state and I have to drive 45 miles to get to any city, so the whole "trying out for bands thing" is difficult now. Otherwise I could have you give it a listen. I don't play ANY instruments either.

And yeah, the spelling of Brigund is intentional. It came to me in a dream.

I just discovered Words. I think I'm gonna post some more stuff.