brevity

[ice-9]

brave and forthright,
respectfully aware;
ever in thy chair, you
voice yourself to me.
interestingly enough,
true to your words...
"yes," i say to you.

 

[poezante]

 

[Dagny]

Amazing ice. Those few lines have more impact than a hundred others that I've read. I hope you keep writing here hun, I love your words.

 

[Nietzche]

 

[alykitty]

[[Ice]]..

 

[cherub]

icee,
I like this,, not cause it is short, but do to the fact that I can imagine a conversation happening that only meant something to you, personal and very strong.
but I also think there is more to come from this

 

[Noodle]

Nice

Brevity and creativity can be strange bed fellows though, yes?

 

[Mellabopper]

sometimes less REALLY is more

 

[SpeedLimit55]

Iccccce.

Great job, bro.

 

[mealltach]

brevity is the punch of the affirmative here.
your title grabbed my intellectual sensibilities. good good. makes me smile.

 

[bluegirl1]

They say that actions speak louder than words, but never have I heard words spoken so loudly. I was moved, and thought more deeply than reading a book full of poetry. I can't wait to hear more from a true poet and I anticipate the words from next which come.
M.
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"Dance like no one's watching,
and love like it's never going to hurt...."

 

[StoicPoet]

"true to your words...
"yes," i say to you."
Do you see that? I do...
And my eyes graze upon those words, tears flow from my eyes, rivers forming into neverending seas below my feet... your words have truly touched my heart, my spirit, my mind, and my body. I know I have only read one of your poems, and I don't really know you, but... I think I'm in love.

 

[ice-9]

oh....wow.
thank you so much. your feedback is truly appreciated.
i'm very flattered.

 

[C Divinity]

good work

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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard...