break this

[drea]

you tiptoe, just tiptoe
in that tiny little dance of yours
around the topic, above the subject
above me all the time
you whisper, sweet nothings
sweet somethings, to a fool
those somethings, those words
those somethings to me
you look, and you stare
youre plateglass
above and beyond
to here and though me
blocking the way...
we chit chat, its civil
i can be your best friend.
i can be your worst enemy.
i AM both.
i forget that im in love sometimes
when i notice the light again
and think im happy for once
but no,..
im still in love.
were all so simple, dear
all encapsulated in this tiny cell
you degrade, i dessicate
its biology 101 when im loving you
we just talk
or, you just talk
i listen intently
...or so to speak
my mind wanders off like such previous words
i rattle and twist the things that you say
and hope
that they mean what i want them to.
id be lying if i said im happy for you
id rather she broke your heart
than prove me a fool
but im dressed like a jester and the part fits well.
and so i repeat myself.
and so i repeat myself.
and maybe one day
and maybe one day
i can break this trend.
i can break this--
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there is freedom within/ there is freedom without/ try to catch the deluge in a paper cup/ theres a battle ahead/many battles are lost/but youll never see the end of the road when youre traveling with me....NF.
[This message has been edited by drea (edited 07 September 2001).]

 

[ice-9]

i've run out of different ways of saying how much I like your pieces...so here is a

 

[Shuddr2Think]

"were all so simple, dear
all encapsulated in this tiny cell
you degrade, i dessicate
its biology 101 when im loving you"
"you look, and you stare
youre plateglass
above and beyond
to here and though me
blocking the way..."
wow....
uhm.
yeah.
this poem is beautiful.
thank you....
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We are all in the gutter,but some of us are looking at the stars...~oscar wilde
**The quality of the imagination is to flow, and not to freeze~emerson**
[This message has been edited by Shuddr2Think (edited 08 September 2001).]

 

[amber::]

brilliant. i even printed it out. o0oo

 

[lilygirl]

i love this line...
"i rattle and twist the things that you say
and hope
that they mean what i want them to. "
beautiful poem.
~lil
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"you will get this chance but once, don't let simple shit get you down"
therapy is expensive, poppin bubble wrap is cheap. you decide.
sn~ sparkleylily

 

[fizzygirl]

one more

i especially like this...
"and think im happy for once
but no,..
im still in love."
yes.