blue

[.dR spgeddi]

i like blondes
and i like brunettes
i like red
and i like bald heads

but blue's a color i've never loved before
it shines in the sun and i hope you know youre
beautiful

deep deep blue
pools in your eyes
deeper than i could ever dive
but i aspire
to get inside
and swim in that blue
youre beautiful

oh baby i love blue
pathetic love song
but its true-ooooh
youre beautiful


now i like blonde
and i like brunettes
i like red
and i like bald heads

and you defy all the things i loved before
i know that many laugh but i hope you know youre
beautiful

deep deep blue
pools in your eyes
further than the furthest horizon line
but i would like
you tandem on my bike
and we'd ride into the blue
youre beautiful

oh baby i love blue
pathetic love song
but its true-ooooh
youre beautiful

 

[doofqueen]

wow thats really lovely, it really shows how much you see someones beauty

 

[.dR spgeddi]

thanx... i was gunna loose it if i posted another piece tat no one read!
i've posted like 100 comments in this forum since christmas!
i dont expect everyone to comment or even read my shit!
but i'm now only reading work by people who bother to read and comment in other people's thread's.
i couldnt care if someone commented and said..."youre fuct up man, cant write and should give up." i just wanna hear from people!
thanx again. i know we have had a few differences of opinion(!)... but i swear, i like you.... actually alot- youre a communicator. but dont expect me to be civil... it'd ruin my rep!

 

[.dR spgeddi]

its a true stiry about a girl who works in the chicken shop nearby!

 

[doofqueen]

i've only recently started reading this forum again, i will look out for more of your stuff Totally know what you mean about no one reading your work...we all obviously want feedback if we are posting it in here aye?

And yeah i am a communicator, i love people and i take them as they are no matter what difderence of opinion we have hold...your still in love with me...i know hehehe

 

[.dR spgeddi]

stop poking your tongue out at me or ill pour liquid on it!

 

[Raz]

Dude, that was great

I like the way it comes together like kind of cheesy 60's pop song, but still with credibility. Kind of reminds me of frente stuff or something like that early 90's light pop...

 

[.dR spgeddi]

it is so a cheesy 60s pop song. that is ace you picked it... tho i reakon it the "blue-oooh" that gives it away.
i'll play/sing it for you one day!

 

[onetwothreefour]

it's nice, but not too corny. as i said to mr_fluffy one day, it's a hard task to pull off.

 

[.dR spgeddi]

^sweet, about time i got a something outta you in here!
now what this about you pulling off mr fluffy?