Blind Date

[Pomplemous]

I love it when you fall about laughing
When your smile spreads from ear to ear
You laugh most when you are trying
To play with angels
For you are one? Or maybe near?

You left here tonight with a chuckle
Though you couldnt hear
me say I cannot kiss you!
I cannot kiss you!
You are not the one I want to share
my life with
My days with
And yet I say
Come back next week and then we'll see...

 

[RareForm]

This is excellent..

 

[Pomplemous]

did you think so? hmm. I thought it was sub-standard and yet....sigh. true. hahaha

 

[Leg]

yea i really liked it, too

i think you could have left the angels part out
but hey
it's nice

 

[Pomplemous]

i agree - change that a bit

 

[cherub]

I liked the part about the angels,,,,, go figure

definately a cute piece !