MynameisnotDeja
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o0psy Daisy said:as a text porn enthusiast, i wanna let you know that this is lovely. One tiny suggestion -- the line that didn't work for me is when Devin repeats what Cora says (“You feel so good Cora”). That part of the dialog is just a little unnatural to my ears.
Great job!!! :D
Benefit said:I liked it very much, but think that Cora should be less prude and let Devin get some anal action in.
HAHA!The actual sensation of an erection is like an angel riding a cloud into Heaven and breathing glory on your balls as it passes through.
didn't read the entire thread but a word that always comes to mind (lol when I'm thinking conceptually which is not all the time when getting turned on!) about erections is: engorging.
It feels wonderful to have a LOT of blood pumped into my dick. Stretching, engorging, filling up, becoming hard. Ready to penetrate into a vagina and squirt my seed deep into her body. Yes, yes, woo it is hot in here!