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breakyaself

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There are a tumbling thousand words
That i breathe
Only to others
(about you)
You saunter
You slowly
Undress
(desired and sexy)
Im fresh
A contridiction
Broken rules
Make no mistake
I am yours
(acknowledgment)
 
I like the form of this, the way it flows as if it's just fallen out of your head, with the short lines, the parentheses... the kind of thought-stream which points to the fact that there's always more going on than there appears (which I'm sure is also true of this poem).
 
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