~beer glass confessions~

[neverwas]

another day
another dollar.
another beer
another hollar.

you're beautiful ya know
i think i love you.

here turn the glass upside down, now look.
see how the image has turned?
beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

you're beautiful ya know
i think i love you.

im sorry i dont date people i work with.
actually i really dont want to date at all.

the smell of beer
the stench of stale cigarettes.
there's someone pissing in the fire place
oh my god this is such a mess.

food all over the floor
parsley thrown god knows where.
the stripper has his glasses down her pants.
dropping lollies into his mouth falling directly from her pussy.

one potato
two potato
three potato
four

five potato
six potato
excuse me security...there's someone lying on the floor.

drunk and unrefined
i pour the night away.
we dance and laugh
i tease till you cry.
you call me 'tickles and bubbles'
theres nothing more to this than me being your beer whore.i hope u understand.

another dance
another dollar.
another beer
another hollar.

you have great tits.
they're something of which to be proud.
you're beautiful ya know
i think i love you.

this place is like a horny zoo
someones left the gate open.
my body aches in places unkown
not long now till i can go home.

round and round the round a bout.
just wanting it to stop.
i long for a non beer and smoke covered cuddle.
i long for quiet with only a tiny bit of noise.

 

[E-girl]

i'm starting to enjoy stories of your new job.
There are filled with a lot of familiar feelings.
The excitement.... the loathing... the flirting... the attitude.
Something i can relate to.
It's all a game, after awhile.

i long for a non beer and smoke covered cuddle.

me too.

 

[beanpoophead]

this is really good!

i like how it flows, it paints a picture in my mind.

 

[up all night]

i long for quiet with only a tiny bit of noise.

This was well written babe. Really did put me right there.

That last line that I quoted is perfect both in context and just as a simple line on its own. That's all I want too sometimes.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I love the way that the topic slowly becomes clearer as you read - also the emphasis on the repetition of things, i know my job feels like that - a lot!

 

[.dR spgeddi]

that fuckin rocks.

its real.

i raise my glass of ale to your new inspiration.

 

[Raz]

I'm with E-girl, I'm really enjoying the stuff you're writing about your work. You seem to have a really solid way of describing it so that it comes across as a place with definite mood and atmosphere...and it's not easy to do that in so few lines, so great work! :D

 

[neverwas]

wow thanx guys.

this is the first time in a week ive sat infront of a computer and it was touching to read ur comments. i was struggling for a while with my writting and needed some new inspiration.

love you all

~K~