bathtub/reflection/pseudocleanse

[satori18]

i notice the water /
uniformly muddy with product /
patterns swirl for a day-after-punch /
murky and cluttered / as my soul
without love /
and bathwater with vanilla oil
refusing to do what i have set it up for
pacify...and please my olfactory
drying and tired
trespasses make good conversation
is my goal to entertain
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sometimes it's not so much a question of availability, or option. and the control is lost...the privalege of choice not available, but the guilt waits at the midpoint just the same....after action, befor resolution.

 

[mirabii]

wow... powerful imagery, i feel trapped inside the poem!
love your work, keep posting please!!
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if you found out you were dreaming, would you want to wake up?
Please don't interrupt me. That last sentence took a lot of effort to think of and now I have to think of another one.

 

[satori18]

thank you so much....
i appreciate the feedback....
be well
peace-