B -

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

And for about 18 years,
I never knew what blood type I was.
It took until the time
that i was in the hospital,
almost dying.
so close to needing a transfusion.

And they told me my blood type,
a few days later.
b negative,
they said.

Be Negative.

Is there a pun there?
trying to be depicted?

Be Negative,
I think.

I can't think
anymore
negative than I already do.

It's running through my blood.

 

[TiberCross]

i liked your poem.



is negativity a product of environment or circumstance?
or is it relative?

 

[Señora Frijol]

interesting poem. something different.- i like it, as i usually do from you.

I used to laugh and tease my brother because i am A positive and he is O. I would tell him how i have A plus blood cause i'm the greatest but he's just an O and they are the most common and they can donate to anybody but i am special with my A+ blood. Hee. I hope he's forgotten all of that.

 

[Siany]

I like this

 

[shannabanana]

this is my favorite poem of yours so far.

 

[katmeow]

Love your work!!

 

[belisimo]

V-

very good, very smart

 

[Raz]

That was really clever...I like :D

 

[faithfully dangerous]

this is my fave of yours so far, too.

very well written, and you really know how to use form to your advantage!

the capitalized "Be Negative" is essential to getting your point across. nice.

keep it up yo! come back to the lounge, too!

 

[katmeow]

This still makes me smile

 

[E-girl]

i remember this one. still liking it

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

i just thought about this one last week.
thanks for the bump.

 

[KaideAlike44]

i saw this on the board for a while but I neglected to read it, I have to say that this is an awesome poem, great job!