Awareness Supreme

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I'm so high,
I'm vibrating core
an explosion apparent
it flitters for sure
an earshaking pleasure
I'm peaceful at heart
See a landscape with blues
extrapolate greens
a lot of colors
that really need to be seen
Buzzing, overlapping
this feeling's a beaut
in two places at one
sometimes that get cute
Awareness supreme
I'm more than that's there
These pins quite remind me
I've more reasons to care.

 

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I'm peaceful at heart
See a landscape with blues
extrapolate greens
a lot of colors
that really need to be seen

the way that section sits in it's own rhythm makes me think it might be the important part.
either way, i like the joyfulness you're managed to share

 

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Thank you...I guess I was attempting to share the joy from that experience.

 

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Awareness supreme
I'm more than that's there
These pins quite remind me
I've more reasons to care.

Its lines like these that make me just 'get' ur writing. its simple but intriqute