autumn sol

[ice-9]

look at lifes field
of rose bushes indeed
alluring reds and yellows
and thorns that cut to bleed
step lightly young friend
and dont overdo it
be mindful young friend
look at yourself
look at the world around you
appreciate the beauty
and the sun will seem brighter
and the sun will shine higher
and the sun will dance lightly on your shoulders.

[ 19 October 2002: Message edited by: ice-9 ]

 

[Nietzche]

 

[Dagny]

My sunshine? That would be you, iceeie. Beautiful.

 

[Sara Tonin]

Sweet and full of truth. Just like you, I assume?

 

[Angelight]

 

[cherub]

icee the last few days i have been amazed by the beauty of the changing trees and the landscape around me and i am constantly in awe,,,
you put the words down nicely !

 

[Queen Beat]

This was beatifully serene. I still have something you wrote at the start of the year up on my wall because it creates such soothing and peaceful feelings in me. I love your writing and the images it evokes.
For anyone who wants to read Stasis, you'll find it here.

 

[raverchik]

icey this is really good, you should show me your poems more often!
~sherry~

 

[Sugar Ant]

and it felt so bright and so alive

 

[poezante]

icee,
You made my day, in what would otherwise be a dull and drab one.
thanks,

 

[ice-9]

thanks for your responses. i didn't think my words would affect ppl much, but now i guess i know better.