'August Sound'

[applesbliss]

In our stretched arms
which are litly dark
during the day in this sterling shadow arc
wonder wandering
We made her bare
her wisdom of youth
because of the age she reached
held inside of truth
recieved back into navy blue
sitting unrecievable in a dark hue
shake shake
we both go down
ride the bus together back to town
crying all day
and been the large drops
back down, take our feelings
at lay, with their sound
I've been asking everyone
if they're right for us.
applesbliss

 

[E-girl]

wow hon, that was very moving! keep writing

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[PuristLove]

The imagery was very well done. I like the way you used colors to pain both pictures and emotions. I am impressed, I have been waiting for a chance to read your poetry for a while, and I'm glad I finally got to.
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[Noodle]

I'm glad you are writing and sharing here again, my online friend. I hope you know that hapiness truly resides within you. You'll know soon how to draw on it from time to time, in these seemingly endless gray sky moments.

< Be well brother.

 

[fizzygirl]

 

[applesbliss]

thank you