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psillocybin

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this is black
but it shines
like the summer moon
after nine.

I look at the bright
and just can't wait to see;
at six in the morning
the light reflects off the trees.

I sit in any vneue,
it's the same sky I see....
the vastness is so great
sometimes it scares me.

the blinks that are out there
when the stars dance
fall through to the atmosphere
like a game of chance.

when the clouds roll by
and block out the view,
just imagine further....
and look up again soon.
 
psillocybin said:
I look at the bright
and just can't wait to see;
the blinks that are out there
when the stars dance
fall through to the atmosphere
like a game of chance.

i love the clean, neat style and the thoughtfulness of the rhymes
you are definitly chief of the keyboard
kool work
 
'when the clouds roll by
and block out the view,
just imagine further....
and look up again soon.
'

love the ending! the entire piece is really pretty cute (if the adj. cute is offensive - my apologies;) ) ... nice work =D
 
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