Aquality

[RareForm]

peculiar that i, meager & objective in my guise, would able myself in my mind to document this in my time, my thoughts on such a day of labor, a day of redundancy. Yah..weh..with his beacon of light always along side but never dressing my phase, or addressing my despair. surely with your architectural genius you would offer your guidance to a man, meager & scientific, the satisfaction of your incredible being, your rapturous love. without love to speak of i suffer. i've always been lost. since i can remember. but i do remember you. too many alternate endings with your antagonist triumphantly surrendered. i couldn't have a clue what's right and what's true, are you the guiding light, or are you a faux prophet too? i ache and i tremble with this passage, a visage no longer to surmise. stand up to hide. and i've been doing this for years. i remember when i was a child, i'd say i knew you'd arrive just to deny you. i was an untrained believer. let's play fetch, i'll be the retriever.

 

[Jabberwocky]

peculiar that i, meager & objective in my guise, would able myself in my mind to document this in my time, my thoughts on such a day of labor, a day of redundancy. Yah..weh..with his beacon of light always along side but never dressing my phase, or addressing my despair. surely with your architectural genius you would offer your guidance to a man, meager & scientific, the satisfaction of your incredible being, your rapturous love. without love to speak of i suffer. i've always been lost. since i can remember. but i do remember you. too many alternate endings with your antagonist triumphantly surrendered. i couldn't have a clue what's right and what's true, are you the guiding light, or are you a faux prophet too? i ache and i tremble with this passage, a visage no longer to surmise. stand up to hide. and i've been doing this for years. i remember when i was a child, i'd say i knew you'd arrive just to deny you. i was an untrained believer. let's play fetch, i'll be the retriever.

I really enjoyed this piece it reminded me of a mix of the old essayists like montaigne mixed with free verse hip hop.

 

[RareForm]

thanks man. thank you for reading.

 

[StatuS tickleS]

i like the mosaic of prose and especially enjoyed the rhyme scheme

 

[New]

This read as a stream of conciousness to me, just spraying your feelings out even while aware of the consequences.

I like it a lot.

 

[StatuS tickleS]

yeah, the stream of consciousness is absolutely artful. and so by examining the scheme inherent, which propends an artful imagination inherent of the artist, i don't know, karmic harmony........all knowledge exists all through time, and you drew, seem to have a sonic-to-scripture enrapturing of this experiental esoteric anomaly.

i'm sure it takes less effort than i imagine.