Apology in A minor

[Mary Poppins]

So If I cry and spill my tears
When you say hello
It’s not you
It’s not what you’ve done
It’s being touched
That makes me feel too much

So if I wince when you reach out
Your hand burnt by my shrug
It’s not you
It’s not what you’ve done
It’s being touched
That makes me feel too much

And when I run from your arms
Without words or explanations
It’s not you
It’s not what you’ve done
It’s being touched
That makes me feel too much

I wish I could feel you
Feel what I’m supposed to
But pain gets in the way
And hurt gets to me first
I’ve realized not feeling
Will always be easier than dealing

For now.

 

[katmeow]

I could really picture this working as song lyrics

Tis good!

 

[lostNfound]

bury it better than dealing or feeling until you feel yourself begin to crumble from the core. Your numbness the only cause, if you could have felt the first crack you could have dealt with it

I really liked this Miss P, got me thinking.

 

[Mean Girl]

i feel like throwing a tony robbins line at you. live with passion! take action!

but that said, the corner of inaction is awfully inviting. good luck with it all

 

[yakksoho]

An excellent composition! very well thought out. I like the ending a lot but my favourite stanza is the first.

 

[cherub]

very relatable piece,,, broken lives we learn to get by the best we can.... amazing piece here

 

[Doppelganger]

I've been reading all your work MP and I really liked this one... and sempiternal!

 

[Cosmic Mist]

Wow. This is one of the besting thing i have read in ages, and i relate to it so much. Such amazing writing, the emotions have been captured perfectly.

I hope everything gets better for you soon.

*hugs*

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

i agree with yakksoho in that the composition of this piece is fantastic, and the endings my favourite part too.

very nicely written mp