Traumatizd4life
Bluelighter
- Joined
- Jul 23, 2001
- Messages
- 666
Cold or too Cold or something
NOTE:this was thought of originally to be played with music so it may lose something here, i made it up walking home on a very cold day like last week.
this isnt really complete i dotn have music for it or the full lyrics done just posting cause im bored
Structure/beat-This was supposed to be kinda a rock/hiphop kinda thing with the odd numbered verses(paragraphs) being like melodic and the even numbered ones being upbeat hip-hoppish
Theres a chill when you walk in the room
There is an icy exterior to you
There is no smile on your lips
Your just too Cold for Me
A sight like you deserves a light
but noone can ever see
who you are and what you could be
with a surface of ice how do you expect
to move on, move forth and find whats next
I have seen your beauty
i knew you were the one for me
but I've Never seen you laugh
and now i know your just to cold for me
Never a tear running down your face
Never a shadow in your eye
there is no truth to be told
your exterior is a lie
We all know that you feel
the same things that we do
so why do you hide you intimate suprise
when i said that i loved you
[This message has been edited by Traumatizd4life (edited 21 October 2001).]
NOTE:this was thought of originally to be played with music so it may lose something here, i made it up walking home on a very cold day like last week.
this isnt really complete i dotn have music for it or the full lyrics done just posting cause im bored
Structure/beat-This was supposed to be kinda a rock/hiphop kinda thing with the odd numbered verses(paragraphs) being like melodic and the even numbered ones being upbeat hip-hoppish
Theres a chill when you walk in the room
There is an icy exterior to you
There is no smile on your lips
Your just too Cold for Me
A sight like you deserves a light
but noone can ever see
who you are and what you could be
with a surface of ice how do you expect
to move on, move forth and find whats next
I have seen your beauty
i knew you were the one for me
but I've Never seen you laugh
and now i know your just to cold for me
Never a tear running down your face
Never a shadow in your eye
there is no truth to be told
your exterior is a lie
We all know that you feel
the same things that we do
so why do you hide you intimate suprise
when i said that i loved you
[This message has been edited by Traumatizd4life (edited 21 October 2001).]
