Animosity

[RareForm]

Extol your eminent obscurity
Raise me up on your celestial banner
Child-like devotion to revelation
Can't you see what I can't see
Testify your incisiveness
Your conjecture is the path
Don't be disgruntled now
You can lie right next to me
Our bodies will succumb to the same pose
Let us see who can appease the Earth first
I pledge I'll be the richer soil

 

[Altered_Soul9]

fucking awesome ending. Loved it. Very Nice

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

RF you really have a gift! Exceptionally clever use of words!

 

[faceless_shadow]

damn.....you have a way of playing with your words so that they sometimes seem deceiving to me....the ending was awesome

 

[RareForm]

^thanks SW, been wanting to read more of your poems....!

 

[TiberCross]

i pledge i'll be the richer soil.

where the hell did you come up with that. that is just genius.

 

[cherub]

i enjoy reading your work,,, you have a mind that keeps me guessing what will be next. outstanding.

i like that last line also,,

 

[CrYsTaLe]

holy hell...that was great! you have a way of making it sound one way and in the end it twists and turns into something new, something completely opposite from the first!!! I love this piece!!!

 

[LostProphecy]

Hey buddy, nice job. Can I hire you as my personal thesaurus??? Nice work...

 

[RareForm]

^^I understand......thanks though

 

[Rollingrrl]

Let me add my admiration for your work and my shocked awe over that last line. damn is that a clincher! great job!

 

[Altered_Soul9]

DIS HERE POEM IS THE SHIZZLE NITTLE MY BITTLE!!

 

[LostProphecy]

^^^Oh my gay. HA!