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Extol your eminent obscurity
Raise me up on your celestial banner
Child-like devotion to revelation
Can't you see what I can't see
Testify your incisiveness
Your conjecture is the path
Don't be disgruntled now
You can lie right next to me
Our bodies will succumb to the same pose
Let us see who can appease the Earth first
I pledge I'll be the richer soil
 
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damn.....you have a way of playing with your words so that they sometimes seem deceiving to me....the ending was awesome
 
i pledge i'll be the richer soil.

where the hell did you come up with that. that is just genius.
 
i enjoy reading your work,,, you have a mind that keeps me guessing what will be next. outstanding.

i like that last line also,,
 
holy hell...that was great! you have a way of making it sound one way and in the end it twists and turns into something new, something completely opposite from the first!!! I love this piece!!!
 
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