and to this

[goodnitestar]

and to this

simplications and false incertations
words that neither ryhme nor sell
people with sour notations and desires
left hatred
right down to that little thing you call hell

offering me a few stings of that dusty draw
slipping away with a few straight straws

lifeless tight grips of teeth and jaw
as your eyes fell into mine

 

[tweakin]

likewise

this is so gripping - i love it. really.. kudos

 

[E-girl]

fabulous!