"An Attempt"

[human paraquat]

an attempt

afraid of an even younger love, the lowest point she'd been

young boy nothing hurts in a dull, decomposing grayness

to the lowest living he led such unrequited love, pining

down to more searing flesh, afraid

 

[FixXxer]

intresting write.... verrrrrry intresting.

 

[RareForm]

i would have loved to seen more to this, but i liked it though....

thanks for sharing!

 

[cherub]

agree with both comments above, would love to see more but more writtings from you will do