America

[entropy90]

America

Here I sit, wide awake, discouraged, fetal, empty.
Now I lay, dead asleep, controlled, sedated, sickly.
Soon I rise, unleashed by fate, to do my work so grimly.
Then I stand, freed from land, to descend upon her swiftly.
When I rest, her snow white dress, is stained with blood so thickly.​

Can anybody guess how Im feeling right now?

 

[New]

I'm guessing you feel betrayed.

 

[entropy90]

Yeah, you hit the nail on the head as they say.

 

[Jabberwocky]

I really enjoyed this piece entropy. Sometimes its good to write as just a way of bringing about a catharsis. But you definetly have talent, your words seem compact but expansive. Thank you for sharing, please post more of your work.

 

[entropy90]

Thank you very much. And I definatly will be posting more.

 

[not_broken_420]

I'm definitely liking how you use your words so well in this.